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? asked in Hiburan dan MusikJajak Pendapat & Survei · 8 years ago

Kritik cerpenku lagi ya guys..?

http://wulanayusari.blogspot.com/2013/04/sekat-din...

Apa kesan kalian terhadap cerpenku??

Tolong dikritik ya bagian mana yang kurang, terimakasih :)

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  • Yahoo! Answer
    Lv 6
    8 years ago
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    Itu mah bukan cerpen(cerita pendek).

    Tapi lebih mirip puisi.

    Diary juga.

  • ?
    8 years ago

    Lu mayan...,

    eigh... Lu Wulan ...

    Bagus...bagus..meski ada satu dua kata yang kurang pas dalam penarapan atai=u pengetikan..,

    secara...,alur cerita udah masuk utuk di fahami dan di mengerti..,

    ..yapp...semangat aja dech...berkarya terus biar tambah maju...

  • Cicila
    8 years ago

    Kesannya kayak puisi ya ?? Cerpennya jangan pakai kata 'kau' lah ..agk aneh ..

    Trims :)

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