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I am in 7th grade and I had to write an epilogue to the book "Or Give Me Death". Since I based it off of the book I give the baseline credits to the author. Please tell me what you think of it:
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- AJLv 78 years agoFavorite Answer
Wow, only in 7th grade? I think you're story is very good. I love the intro. Only the sentence in the intro that ends with "I start to read", in my opinion should end with a punctuation mark (:) and not with a semicolon (;).
Other than that I think it's perfect and you show a lot of promise of becoming a good writer. Keep up the good job.
