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Should i change anything???/????????copywrited?

I've never been in your presence

But yet your my favorite present

We've never spent time together

But, I know I can love you forever

In my heart, I feel so close to you

I just hope my feelings are true

In my mind we have an amazing bond

All we have to do in real life, is go far and beyond

Daydreaming of when I'll get that special chance to hold your hand

While making life long plans

It all feel so right

What a beautiful sight

I call you my soulmate for a reason

Because I dont believe we just met for a season

I wanna change all we have to do in real life is go far and beyond but to what? And should I put soul in the place of heart and put in my heart it feel so right? And should I make that line come after beyond or leave it as is?

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  • Carpet
    Lv 4
    8 years ago
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    In my mind we have an amazing bond

    I've been told I'm a poet - I think I've been conned

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