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BEST ANSWER: Will this thesis work?
I'm writing an argumentative essay on sex education in schools. I'm against it. My thesis is: Sex education should not be taught in schools because it will only confuse students and cause unsuitable situations. However, my reasons are: outrage in classroom, teachers aren't ready to teach sex ed, and my third paragraph is moral and religious values. Will this be ok with the thesis I have? Thanks!
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- Diane ALv 78 years ago
No, that is not a good thesis statement. A thesis statements states what your essay will backup tp prove or disprove. You just list two completely nebulous, vague states (confusion and unsuitable situations-what ever those are). Then your reasons have really nothing to do with defining and elucidating the thesis statement.Ask your instructor to help you make a thesis statement.
Source(s): BS, MS - 8 years ago
dont forget to mention that kids can perfectly learn about sex with porn, since you say sex education in school is bad, you fgt
