does this sentence make sentence? can you reword it better?

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Although I have continuously moved in the last ten and a half years, both by choice and not by choice, this is still the biggest move I am pursuing in my life so far.   


Does the above sentences make sense? Can you rewrite it better so it reads more clearly for me? I'm esl

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? · Answer

In spite of the fact that I have been continuously on the move for the last ten and half years both by choice and without choice, this is still the biggest move I've been pursuing in my life so far.

Steve the Pizzaman · Answer

I've moved many times in the past, both by choice and coherence, and this one is the most important move of my life.

That's the best I could do. Here's a tip: when you can, say things in fewer words rather than more.

Jennifer · Answer

Through choice and happenstance, I've found myself relocating many times in the past ten and a half years.  At this time, I am pursuing the biggest move of all.

Ash · Answer

Although I have over a decade of desired and necessary moves, my new endevor will be my greates feat.

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does this sentence make sentence? can you reword it better?

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