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Can you correct my grammer in this paragraph please?

Pol-Pot, The ruthless Cambodian revolutionist who led the Khmer Rouge, died of unknown causes 5 days ago. He leaves behind two wives: Khieu Ponnary,Mea Son, and a daughter Sitha.

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  • 7 years ago

    Pol-Pot, the ruthless Cambodian revolutionist who led the Khmer Rouge, died of unknown causes five days ago. He left behind his two wives, Khieu Ponnary and Mea Son, and his daughter, Sitha.

    I believe that is correct. Keep in mind the use of appositives.

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