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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 7 years ago

Describe how to kissing someone's neck in a book?

I am writing a story and the guy come up from behind her and starts to kiss her neck. I just don't know hoe to describe it in her POV. This is what leads up to it...

"So what have you been up to this summer Brooklyn," Addison asked. "That we don't know?" She added, leaning against her locker as I got stuff for English out of mine. As I was about to reply, strong arms suddenly wrapped around my waist, hugging me from behind. I was surrounded by the scent of honey and Axe. Tyler.

"Spending lots of time with me, of course." he replied for me, all the while kissing my neck. (enter description)

So that is kinda it. (and she needs to get a hickey) I know that the guy usually nibbles and sucks, but I am 13 and have never had a boy even kiss me, so I know not of this subject. I really need help...

thanks!

Update:

sorry for the grammar mistakes. I was typing fast.

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  • 7 years ago
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    In my latest novel I was going to have the main man kiss the girl on the neck as it has worked in two other books I have written. I left it out this time but if you must then start with him kissing her on the top of the head having him smell her aroma of her hair as he slides his lips towards her naked neck were he gentle kisses then sucks before his glides his lips to her ear lobes. On the ear lobes he tugs gently with his lips as a tingling sensation runs through his body. Enough of this tingling sensation he leaves her ear lobes sliding his lips over her lower cheeks making his way to her moist soft red lips. I specialise in writing as if I am teasing you.. Next week the 2nd novel in the Shroud over Paradise series is released The Rose of Jennifer. I would love you to read it.

  • ?
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    7 years ago

    He came up behind me like he had so many times before. I tensed when he touched my sides. Then he put his lips on the right side of my neck, kissed it, leaving a little moisture on my neck.

  • 7 years ago

    This is a very casual kiss, not a passionate one, by a guy who should know better. He cannot talk while kissing her neck.

    "Spending lots of time with me of course," he replied for me, then his warm lips trailed across my neck and I could feel the scratchy stubble of his beard.

    "Stop that," I protested and batted at his face. "That tickles."

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