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  • How Do You Describe The End of A Football Game In A Book?

    I am betting this is mostly for boys, but I am writing a story about a girl on the football team and to start the first chapter, I am making it go to the near end of the game. Problem- I know NOTHING about football. All I know is that there is a quarterback and, well that's it. I would rather have someone write a ending kind of thing, but you can describe the sport too boys (and girls).

    I just need a run down on what happens.

    Thanks!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • How do you describe a passionate make out/kiss scene?

    I am writing a book and I have the first sweet kind of kiss down, but now I need it to get heated, passionate... a full make out session. Here is the leading...

    "Uh, you have some leaves in your hair." He told me. I felt my cheeks flare up as I tried to get them out. Thinking I got them all out, I let my hands drop. "Missed one." As I began to reach my hands up to get it out, he pulled my arms down to my side, and plucked it out for me. I didn't think much of it, until he brushed some loose hair behind my ear. My eyes locked with his, and I couldn't look away. I felt like I was being spelled by his look, his touch, his smell. "I missed you," he whispered. "So much."

    His eyes looked as if they fighting against a decision, but I could tell one overpowered the other. My heart fluttered with his eyes moved down to my lips and before I knew it, he had moved in for the kill. Our hesitant lips grew more comfortable one we realized the other wouldn't pull away. I didn’t even know what had come over me to give in so easily, but I also didn't exactly regret it either

    .

    His lips were warm and smooth as they brushed against my own. I stiffened when his hands planted themselves on my waist, but his light, heart-warming chuckle managed to loosen me up again. ***PASSIONATE KISS***

    I want something what is filled with emotion, but also I want to know what they are doing. The setting is in the woods and then he drives her home after. I have the scene in my head, just can't see to word it right on paper. So I was asking if ya'll could help me out with the scene here.

    Thanks!

    5 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • How do you describe a starting sweet then passionate kiss?

    Well I am writing a scene in my book (with all copyrights to me!) and well she just got finished getting bullied/beaten by the jock with his two followers watching after school and one of them was a really old friend of hers. Them the jock and one friend left. So here i am now...

    "Are you just going to stand there? Don't you need to get your books?" I asked.

    "No, that was just a lie to get them to leave. I wanted to help you." He replied, turning back around to face me fully. He didn't look at my half-naked body like I thought he would. He kept full attention only on my eyes. I could see he was telling the truth, as I am a master at reading people. Especially the eyes.

    "Why do you think I need your help? Plus… why would I want it?"

    "Well, considering you're strapped to a tree in only your underwear and bra and no one will be here until morning, I thought you would want the help. And I want to." He smiled. Genuinely smiled. I blinked, thinking I was finally turning crazy and was seeing things. Nope, I saw it right. He was smiling.

    "Fine." I growled out, desperate for help. He walked over and started untying my ankles. "So, if you're so sorry, why did you do it?"

    "Do what?" he asked. "And how do you know I am sorry?"

    "Your eyes. That's one of the good things about being an outsider. You get good at reading people." I answered.

    "Ok, but you didn't answer my first question. What did I do?" He finished untying my ankles and started undoing the rope at my waist.

    "You really don't know, do you?" I whispered. He shook his head, casting his eyes downward. "You bullied me, and beat me. You helped Gabe, even though you knew it hurt me. How could you?" My voice was barely audible.

    "I don't know, Ana, I don’t know." He murmured, looking up into my eyes. This was the Luke I remembered. When he and I were little, we were the best of friends, but in high school, when he met Gabe, Luke changed. Not just because his dad was diagnosed with lung cancer, but his first love broke his heart. He didn't think I understood, so he pushed me away, and became one of the jocks. It hurt me, and one of the reasons being I had a serious crush on him, even if he was my best friend.

    But now, with me just in my underwear and bra, I could tell from his eyes that he was letting me back in. He had already untied both ropes, so I was standing just inches in front of him.

    "Uh, you have some leaves in your hair." He told me. I felt my cheeks flare up as I tried to get them out. Thinking I got them all out, I let my hands drop. "Missed one." As I began to reach my hands up to get it out, he pulled my arms down to my side, and plucked it out for me. I didn't think much of it, until he brushed some loose hair behind my ear. My eyes locked with his, and I couldn't look away. I felt like I was being spelled by his look, his touch, his smell. "I missed you," he whispered. "So much."

    So yeah, there it is. Now I just need a kiss. And people who think I can't come up with my own kissing ideas... I have it in my head just can't see to word it right on paper. It's going to be sweet at first and then really passionate (like if you watched the Vampire Diaries last night, when Klaus and Caroline kissed <5x11>). I want the kiss to be really long, but not to to long. I want a sweet kiss, them full hot make out season against a tree.

    Please help me in some way, and be nice. Thanks!

    P.S- if you think I need to add anything, please tell me!

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • A fake town where a Princess would live...?

    I am writing a book about a princess and I need a town name that sounds royal. The princess's name is Anastasia (Ana for short). The town is beautiful with rolling hills and flowers.

    Thanks!

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • The Mortal Instruments: Do Clary and Jace End Up Together?

    I am reading the books and just watched the movie...and I want to know if Clary and Jace end up together (as boyfriend and girlfriend). And JUST THE RELATIONSHIPS PLEASE!

    Thanks!

    1 AnswerComics & Animation7 years ago
  • What is a fake supernatural creature name?

    I know the question didn't really make sense, so I am going to explain more. Just last night I had a dream about... well, ya'll might copy it. But I need a new kind of supernatural creature. Like the Shadowhunters in The Mortal Instruments. They look human, but have a tattoo of a crest moon for girls on there lower back and boys on there left shoulder. They kill the evil.

    Thanks!

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • Small, sleepy beach/harbor two name?

    Hello fellow yahoo answers people. So, from the question...you know my problem. I asked my teacher and she gave me an example of a small beach town from a Sarah Dessen book called Colby. I thought it was the perfect name, but I didn't want to steal it from Sarah. So, I need a different one. It a small town where everybody know everybody.

    It's a regular small town. The town has a beach, boardwalk, market (The Food Market), gas place (Gas Pass Stop) (I am still thinking about that name), surf place (Surf Low), cafe (Mary Anne's Cafe), bike shop (Troy's Bike Shop), clothing store (Sunshine Clothing) (needs a new name), fishing shop (The Bait Shop), etc.

    I was thinking of some names, but none of them fit. I like names that start with the letter c or end in y. It just sounds better.

    PLEASE, LET THEM BE ALL FAKE NAMES THAT SOUND REAL.

    Thanks!

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • Small, sleepy beach/harbor two name?

    thelo fellow yahoo answers people. So, from the question you know my problem. I asked my teacher and she gave me an example of a small beach town from a Sarah Dessen book called Colby. I thought it was the perfect name, but I didn't want to steal it from Sarah. So, I need a different one. It a small town where everybody know everybody.

    It's a regular small town. The town has a beach, boardwalk, market (The Food Market), gas place (Gas Pass Stop) (I am still thinking about that name), surf place (Surf Low), cafe (Mary Anne's Cafe), bike shop (Troy's Bike Shop), clothing store (Sunshine Clothing) (needs a new name), fishing shop (The Bait Shop), etc.

    I was thinking of of some names, but none of them fit. I like names that start with the letter c or end in y. LET THEM BE ALL FAKE NAMES THAT SOUND REAL.

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • A romance story idea with a summer theme?

    I bet most of us writers have read Sarah Dessen books. Well I want a story kinda like hers for my writing idea for a contest. I was thinking the town name will be Colton. It's set in Virginia. PLEASE help me.

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • A romance story idea with a summer theme?

    I bet most of us writers have read Sarah Dessen books. Well I want a story kinda like hers for my writing idea for a contest. I was thinking the town name will be Colton. It's set in Virginia. PLEASE help me.

    4 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • PLEASE read my story?!?

    Um it is on a website called Wattpad. Here is the site...

    http://www.wattpad.com/30321169-it%27s-just-crazy

    Thanks!

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • A different country girl name?

    I am writing a book and I want a different country girl name. Like if you have read the Sarah Dessen books her character names are different like so...

    Remy

    Macy

    Annabel

    Ruby

    Auden

    McLean

    Emaline

    I love these names because they are different them normal girl names. I want a name like them, but has a country twitch to it.

    Thanks!

    4 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • Describe how to kissing someone's neck in a book?

    I am writing a story and the guy come up from behind her and starts to kiss her neck. I just don't know hoe to describe it in her POV. This is what leads up to it...

    "So what have you been up to this summer Brooklyn," Addison asked. "That we don't know?" She added, leaning against her locker as I got stuff for English out of mine. As I was about to reply, strong arms suddenly wrapped around my waist, hugging me from behind. I was surrounded by the scent of honey and Axe. Tyler.

    "Spending lots of time with me, of course." he replied for me, all the while kissing my neck. (enter description)

    So that is kinda it. (and she needs to get a hickey) I know that the guy usually nibbles and sucks, but I am 13 and have never had a boy even kiss me, so I know not of this subject. I really need help...

    thanks!

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • What Are Two Good Fake Name For A Small Town?

    Well my book is about a girl named Tess who lives on farm like land and she is lives in _____fake town name______,Virginia and for Thanksgiving her family is going to ____fake town name______, California.

    I would give you more info, but some people might steal the idea and write in themselves.

    THANKS!

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors7 years ago
  • What Are Some Names For My Supernatural Characters?

    Ok, I need something really weird, but good sounding for a

    -Vampire

    -Werewolf

    -Witch/Wizard

    -Fairy

    -Dragon

    -Ghost

    -Mermaid

    -Angels (good and bad)

    Names Like-

    Albus Dumbledore

    Professor McGonagall

    Hagrid

    Hermione

    Like Harry Potter type of names...Not regular names, but weird different names!

    Thanks!

    4 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • What Are Some Popular Supernatural Beings YOU would like to see in a story?

    I am writing a story about a all supernatural beings camp and it is divided in 10 to 15 groups. I have some right here like...

    -Vampires

    -Werewolves

    -Witches/Wizards

    -Fairies (the good kind)

    -Dragons

    -Ghosts

    -Mermaids

    -Angels (good and bad)

    and NO, I am not trying to copy Harry Potter if you wanted to ask me. It is different!

    Please be nice too, and have answers that you would really like.

    THANKS!!!

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • How do you describe a last kiss in the girls POV?

    I am writing a a story and i need a last kiss. This is what it leads up to... (P.S.- her name is Makayla, but me calls her May.)

    I stood in the doorway of my boyfriend's room, hating what I saw. I could feel my heart breaking slowly, ripping piece by piece. there was the Queen Bee in Drew's bed, only with underwear and a bra on. But's that's not the worse. Drew was under her in only boxers, kissing Amber. I gasped. Hearing this Drew pulled away, swinging his head to the door, where stood. As he saw he, he had on a pained look on his face, I only shook my head. Looking over at Amber, she was smirking.

    "Oh Makayla, did you really think he was your boyfriend? He was mine. You were just a dare from one of his friends." she laughed. I looked over to Drew and he had a shocked face, and was looking at Amber wide eyed. I didn't care. Shaking my head once, I ran out of his doorway, and down the stairs.

    "No, May! Stop! Ugh, Amber, get out! Makayla, I love you. Please, stop!" Drew yelled. But I was done caring; I just had to get out of there. By now he was a few steps behind me. I ran out the door, and down the driveway, with him yelling after me. Once I stopped at the driver's door of my car, I turned around.

    "How could you?" I screamed. Tears were streaming down my face like Niagara Falls. He stopped a foot away from me. I looked up into those big brown eyes I once melted from. He had tears too.

    "It was only supposed to be a dare for the first month we were together, but then I really fell. I tried fighting it so I wouldn't hurt you more, but it overpowered me. You were so selfless and kind, who wouldn't fall in love with you. May, I love you. Please forgive me." he pleaded. Knowing I could speak, I shook my head, turning to get in my car. He grabbed my arm, turning me back to him, and kissed me one last time. Our Last Kiss.

    (the kiss describing now.)

    How was it, good? Bad? Tell and please just try on describing a last kiss.

    thanks!

    1 AnswerSingles & Dating8 years ago
  • A FAKE town name for Virginia?

    I know that not a lot of people will answer with FAKE town or city name for me, but it's OK. I am looking for a town or city name that would go good in the state Virginia. I have look on Google, but the ones I like are always something. Like Elliswood or Belwood. I want a good one that most likely ends with -wood and is 100% FAKE. I will be posting the best in my story on www.wattpad.com.

    But PLEASE help!

    thanks!

    1 AnswerBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • A Fake Place To Eat Like 'The Grill' In The Vampire Diaries? Names?

    I am writing a story and the bar/grill is like The Vampire Diaries grill and I don't want to copy so I need a different name.

    Thanks.

    3 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago
  • Describe A Summer Camp When You First See It?

    Well I am writing a book about this girl is forced to go to summer camp...

    Jo Carter had absolutely no intention of enjoying being at Camp Falls. Just the thought of sleeping under the stars gave her the creeps. "WHAT! No air-condition?"

    Cameron Taylor, an all around trouble maker with a rotten attitude, finds himself forced by his father to Camp Red Hawk, to spend the summer. "GREAT, can't wait!"

    When theses two meet, Crestbury Lake will never be the same. Aren't you glad your not a camp councilor. Pranks, drama, and a hidden love are all enstore for the summer.

    The camp is a little old...has cabins, a campfire, and a mess hall...like a camp. How could you describe the lake and things she sees.

    Thanks!

    2 AnswersBooks & Authors8 years ago