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Makayla
Makayla asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 7 years ago

PLEASE read my story?!?

Um it is on a website called Wattpad. Here is the site...

http://www.wattpad.com/30321169-it%27s-just-crazy

Thanks!

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    Lv 7
    7 years ago
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    Starting with the weather is one of the most cliche beginnings your story could have (aside from waking up...which actually happens a few paragraphs later). Sorry but it needs a more interesting hook, I feel like I've read this same thing a million times.

  • ?
    7 years ago

    I like it. I left a comment on wattpad. Would you mind reading mine?

    http://www.wattpad.com/32836335-the-peculiar-oddit...

    thanks!

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