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of Me of Him asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 7 years ago

Do think this poem fitting as time sets today?

Shock is on going

Standing on top of the world

As sunsets and winds blow

Summer and winter on the mind

Being loved romantic

Ages eons of wise at heart fill

The void as young at heart in a kingdom

But looking twice makes my way O Lord

Its twist is not home but homely followed by

In the mirrored of the back seat rest my Love

As meadows spring and cures through

Rainbow liken in the back yard barn

Makes the word never end

Thankful am I_ God being the good present.

But love of truth is Home

And here wait I stay

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  • Lapiz Dominoes.
    Lv 7
    7 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Yes, I find the discombobulation of words

    her and there

    does not detract from the meaning in the least.

    In fact the juxtapositioning/s of the actually visual and romantic, and

    holier intersections of this journey, is e.e. cummmings - ish

    so it is to me, an unusually imagination - kissing

    and memorable

    free verse ~

    it has a rhythmic lilting motion,

    and simultaneously the pensiveness of a longing ascertained...original..Neat poem!

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