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I was inspired wrote a short poem; will you look and comment further?
AS a lineament to,
stars never leave the consolation
Evermore visible in the lineament,
All clear skies seen as solstice’s summer and winter
The four corners to the north and south
A sphere of earth by heavens fullness
What would make this poem into a better Poem?
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- ?Lv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
As liniment for my eyes, stars are dim consolation
evermore fitted to the firmament gulfed by separation
All clear skies see solstice: summer or winter
Four cornered heaven, comes thus never quite hither.
Now add three more stanzas and a couplet and you will almost have a poem.