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Opinion on my writing?
So Far
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So far so good
No hype man
And no mic
No ghostwriters either
Left instruments behind
All of these rhymes
Come straight from
My mind
When and where this will
Take me
I’m eager to find
Imagine the places I could go
If they gave me a mic
I’d rock the crowd
From left to the right
Have them
Shouting my name
All day
And all night
Until the day finally came
That me and my name
Were in
The spotlight
2 Answers
- ?Lv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
The format was painful to the eyes, but I have to admit,
I liked the poem. It clicked. There is no type of meter
or rhyme pattern, but it's almost like hip hop music; you
find the beat to it and you made it work. Catching ending.
Do more, you are pretty good, or is this a one hit wonder?
I would also bring the lines together with a stanza or two,
there was no benefit in reading the intro to Star Wars movie,
in other words, on this one it doesn't work in my opinion, and
no, it did not get me to read it...lol Congrats