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What do you think of my work?
Short Term
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I’m makin’
Short term goals
As my future unfolds
Will I get paid
In silver?
Greenbacks
Or Gold?
How I’ll get there
Is a story
That remains untold
In my right hand
It’s a pen that I hold
I write my own story
As
My history unfolds
Is a story
Currently being written
Each day I awake
And my pen
Stays on the pad
Because
Breaks I don’t take
I’m steady on the grind
Each day I awake
In love with
The rhymes
My mind creates
2 Answers
- MarkLv 57 years agoFavorite Answer
you got a poem better than trash, it aint that high in creativity or a big deal stash, but it has a bit of class and grabs the attention I would keep living it don't get hung up on suspension
live everyday as you say without breaks do what it takes to get thru
play it by ear sometimes if you have to
you got a brain and a pen I hope to see your work again and maybe again
a Shakespeare you might aspire to be but right for now stay on fire cause you are still a wanna bee but may make acclaim some day and time
so keep shootin for the stars you got the rhymes good luck be blessed stay alive and don't become depressed
stay up late if it needs be writing and creating and being free
- Anonymous7 years ago
This poem is trash.
