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constructive criticism on these 3 sentence for school.?
Q: how do you want to accomplish your senior year?
A:My senior year, I want to simply to be happy. Having spending my last three years in ordeal, I foresee my senior as a gratuity to myself. Though, hard work plants success, happiness ensure a bloom.
3 Answers
- Anonymous7 years ago
There shouldn't be a comma after the though, and ensure needs to be ensures. Other than that, I love it! 👍
- ?Lv 47 years ago
I would put something more towards academic success like do you want to get straight A's, do well on SAT/ACT. Get accepted to certain colleges etc. Rather than just saying to be happy. That is only my opinion you can do what you please. Good luck
- Anonymous7 years ago
you have too many commas in there
