Can I have some advice to improve my dating profile?

First off, you;re really cut so it's not your looks.

Secondly, your "about tom" paragraph is a little confusing to read. try to keep one subject to one sentence.

ex)

When not slaving away at work. I eat as much popcorn as humanly possible while watching films, not trying to crash into trees on my mountain bike which does help the enjoyment of it as well as keeping fit.

would be better off as something like:

I work a lot, but outside of work I enjoy shoving popcorn into my mouth and watching movies. I also like trying not to crash into trees on my mountain bike; it's good exercise.

I was more business in repairing it than I could have been, but that is a lot less convoluted. You don't need to put that a fear of crashing into trees is enjoyable to you, because that puts too much emphasis on it and makes you sound serious about crashing a lot instead of just joking about it, and crashing into trees isn;t very intelligent.

Drinking as a first date sounds ambiguous and threatening. I know that sounds silly but hear me out. Are you going out for like sodas or do you mean get together and get drunk? Specify whether you mean it to be an intoxicating event, because some people aren't really into that and some are.

But drinking as an intoxicating event on a first date is threatening because 1/5 women in the US have been sexually assaulted or abused. Getting intoxicated in the presence of a guy they don;t know? Danger city! What if there's something in your drink or the guy rapes or hurts you some other way while you're drunk? So it's not really a good idea to list that, and I hope you see how it wouldn;t be a good activity anyways.

Your theme park day sounds great though. It's fun, it's bubbly, it doesn't put any pressures on your date, it's in public. You can mention that you like a specific theme park in town, which shows that you aren't just throwing random ideas out there. the fact that you have a specific place that you like adds realism to your profile, so you don't seem as vague.

Also, do your chemistry. All of the factors on the chemistry test are important in relationships, and you not doing it seems like you're keeping yourself a secret. A girl can't gauge if she'll be happy with you because some like dependency but some don't, but they'll never know if they'll like how your level of dependency or not because it isn;t listed, and so on and so forth.

Do that other test, too. other than that you sound pretty okay. You have a car and a cat so you're obviously financially okay and you have a basic level of responsibility and understanding of other's needs.You don't do drugs so there's no worry about addiction or lying. You've never been married so you probably don't have recent baggage that could get in the way of a fresher relationship. Good for you!

Don't feel bad,i barely get replies to.I am not the best when it comes to these kind of sites,but it is what it is i guess.

You look fine to me I guess you just need to dye your hair pink first