Can I have some advice to improve my dating profile?

It's not you're looks because there is nothing wrong with you. ..

Start with your personal information e.g..name age d.o.b and so on..

Secondly...start with your hobbies and interests, e.g-what you like? What your into (e.g-sport) and what yiu do in you're spare time.

What you're looking for in life and in a relationship. Mention any good qualities you have (e.g-good sence of humour) and Say what you would you think you would like in a girl (boy if you're gay) thats all you can put really....you could also have a little look at other peoples profiles to get a rough idea of how to word things xx

Maybe change it to "looking for friends". For girls, all good relationships start with friendships. To be honest, you are pretty good looking so it's definitely not your looks. maybe your profile is a bit intimidating.

Be exciting and different. Display the qualities you'd brag about.

Focus on what you have to offer more than what you want. There is probably advice on Youtube.