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thesis statement help?

how can I change this thesis statement to where it doesn't give away my opinion on the subject "Students who work to finance their education value it more and have a better attitude for it since it is their own money whereas students who do not finance their own education will not value it as much or use it with a good attitude."

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  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

    Whether or not students work to finance their own education affects their attitudes and the degree to which they value their schooling.

  • S.J.
    Lv 5
    7 years ago

    Are you making this statement from verified facts in research that you have done (with and without others) or quoting research from others Or is this anecdotal information opbtained from non-verified, but the collective knowledge of conversation? You will need to clarify clearly the orgins of your statement.

  • 7 years ago

    S.J. its an opinion based essay

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