opinions on a song I wrote?

hey guys, this is a song I wrote about 5 minutes ago, do you have any opinions or suggestions?

they say Songs are photographs seen with ears

so why isn’t my picture clear

I’ve gotta figure it out

even if you won’t stand by my side

when i take this photograph

of. my. life.

If you don’t wanna support me

you might as well get up and leave

i don’t care if you don’t believe

when i take this photograph

writing a song is like taking a photograph

capturing the moment and showing it to people who weren’t there

but maybe they’ve been there before

My photograph won’t show your face

anymore

because you don’t like me the way i am now

but people change and I shut the door

sorry if you got left behind

when i take this photograph