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Opinions on a song I wrote?

This is another song I wrote and its definitely not anywhere near completion but I'm just wondering what you think so far and if you have any suggestions for me :) and I also really don't like the last line because its not something I would sing or talk about but I can't think of anything that rhymes with chick!

A double life

i pray you will come home

every day I’m by the phone

you say work has got you

spinning around every room

my heart will keep on beating

i will keep on dreaming

even if you’re living

a double life

a double life

one day I will leave ya

if you don’t pick up your game

treating me lke a sidechick

i thought I was the only one riding on your SHHH

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  • 6 years ago

    Don't like the third stanza. Love the first two.

  • 6 years ago

    awesome i really like the first line it could be a hit

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