Do you like my art?

You have things you could fix when I first looked at it I had to really focus my eyes to see that it wasn't abstract art. So your art doesn't show enough clarity (lighting) for me to figure out what is what right away. But your other issue is that the whole piece looks like a collage also, like as if everything is floating. Probably should focus on one object for chalkboard kind of art.

I think your style is cool, and everything is proportionally right, but the colors should be brighter or more vibrant if you're going to do it on black background. Also, it kind of looks like chalk pastel because everything is so...blended. If it really is in colored pencil I think you should look up some different techniques for using them because you can get super realistic with them. On my instagram ( @Puddingpocket ) I just did some colored pencil wine glasses and they're very crisp. I just watched a youtube tutorial to see how to do that.

Colors are too muddy. Stylistically nothing is pulling together into an integrated picture. It may just be the fact the 'wall' is black or everything is face on, but it's just not working for me.

Not really, it does not move me.

Edit

Because it is poorly composed, weak pointless subject, colours are uninspired, contains nothing thought-provoking and appears to be three minutes wasted.

i don't understand what it is. it's not very "clear"