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? asked in Education & ReferenceWords & Wordplay · 6 years ago

Where would u add proper puncuation?

I've been to plenty of concerts, but to be able to see my all time favorite group, AC/DC was incredible. I witnessed Chris Slade rock the drums, Angus do a 30 min guitar solo, and hear some of the greatest rock n roll songs ever written live.

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  • forte88eng
    Lv 7
    6 years ago

    example for improvement: and hear live some of the greatest rock'n'roll songs ever written. the rest is just fine.

    Source(s): teacher of english as a foreign language.
  • Karen L
    Lv 7
    6 years ago

    Remove the comma after "concerts". Use one after as well as before "AC/DC". It should be "heard" rather than "hear". I would also put "live", after "heard", The way you have it makes it sound as if the songs were "written live", which sounds a bit silly unless they were written right there on the stage as you watched. I would use "minute" rather than "min" and it's "rock 'n' roll" or "rock and roll".

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