Can you please listen to my songs and let me know any opinions and critiques? They are rough cuts and not finalized.?

Where were the upstrums on the first song? you need upstrums to impart rhythm and feel to the chords.

I only listened to the first 30 seconds or so. and it bored me.

The chords themselves were ok, but needed some more oomph and rhythmic suggestion...I could not have played drums to that. it was too skimpy.

the second song was actually not so bad given the genre, it actually had some substance to it at least.

Kinda post punk, thrash metal sound....could use maybe a little more of the weird metal transitions and chunka changes, but not bad really for that type of sound.

Seemed like the guitar was singing over you. And the lyrics really are to pass the song by. Really boring altogether if it wasnt a grunge purpose