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Someone who is good at English please help?

I am writing a short paragraph and English is not my native language. Please, check my grammar for mistakes, thanks:

“This scholarship is not only a unique opportunity to develop myself in biochemistry, but also provide me the possibility to be a grant holder of a course focused in my major area of interest.

Applying to this scholarship could be the key that opens to me the path to future opportunities, such as the postgraduate course that I had proposed myself.”

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  • Norman
    Lv 5
    2 years ago

    This scholarship provides, not provide, unless you change the sentence as another answer suggests. Also you do not apply to a scholarship, you apply for it.

  • Pearl
    Lv 7
    2 years ago

    it sounds good to rne

  • 2 years ago

    I think it should read:

    “This scholarship is not only a unique opportunity to develop my passion for biochemistry, but it also will provide me the possibility of being a grant- holder of a course focused in my major area of interest.

    This scholarship could be the key that opens the path to future opportunities, such as the postgraduate course that I had proposed myself.”

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