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How would you describe this fin better for my book ?
A character's secret daughter from his private family has a tail deformity from a rogue shark attack, and I'm having trouble describing it better
Here's what I have:
Rio spotted her baby's father, about to go over to the light-skinned African American she stopped when she saw a magenta tailed mermaid with black hair carrying a six-year-old mer-girl whom Rio thought was too old to be held until the mermaid sat the young girl down and the blonde saw the young girl only had one tailfin
3 Answers
- Anonymous4 days ago
Ignore what others think
I think what you wrote is fine
Source(s): HCG the xexrvijn - Anonymous5 days ago
Can u haz punctuation?
- Anonymous5 days ago
Anyone who values his or her time would stop reading at the first comma. Why don't you cram a few more adjectives in there?