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Thoughts/Opinions/ Improvements on my poem. Thank you.?
Never Was
I saw you the other day
It had been so long
Once filled with inspiration and grace
It appears you have fallen off pace
Your dreams have become nightmares
The world you live in is your own personal hell
The rafters that hang over you have begun to give way
Like the sunset on a clear autumn day
You wonder will there be a tomorrow?
Or will today be the day
you’ve protected the ones who own you
you have ridiculed the ones who care
I asked why it has come to this?
You paused for a moment before answering
“I thought it was best”
You wonder why he left so long ago
Now you care for a kid that burdens your soul
You began to weep and fell to your knees
You asked God for forgiveness please
You were surprised when I was not sympathetic
I said sympathy is for the feeble
you are just naïve
you thought there was good in everyone
this is where you were wrong.
Now you’re left wondering
Is this your swan song?
What’s it like when reality disappears?
Your mind feasts upon your fears.
Now you want help
now you inquire for my opinion
I believe my opinions count for little
however it’s hard to escape your lost potential
You were a would-have-been a should-have-been
A Never Was
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoCan you predict the top 10 finishers for the Daytona 500?
21 AnswersNASCAR1 decade agoWhat did the "old" ECW mean to you?
To me and I hope to others ECW in the 90s ment more then just wrestling. It was a way of life. From the wrestlers to the music it represented what the 90s was all about and I miss ECW. Look forward to what you guys think.
12 AnswersWrestling1 decade agoThoughts/Opinions/ on this quote.?
Even in the greatest tragedies we admire the heros bravery and his sacrifice. In reality we ridicule the hero as unwise and reckless.
*Tragedy refering to a play or movie lacking a "happy ending"
4 AnswersPhilosophy1 decade agoThoughts/Opinions on this quote.?
I'd rather regret failing, then not trying in the first place.
15 AnswersPhilosophy1 decade agoThoughts/Opinions on this quote.?
For he who waits, conquers nothing but his own failure.
10 AnswersPhilosophy1 decade agoOpinions. Thoughts on this quote.?
For he who waits, conquers nothing but his own failure.
22 AnswersPhilosophy1 decade agoDoes Flavio have a man crush on Alonso?
Flavo is inlove with the guy and it sometimes creepy to hear him talk about him. And why were they always hugging? Hopefully i'll provide a chuckle for someone. What do you guys think?
11 AnswersFormula One1 decade agoI told my best friend i love her.?
Dont usually ask these sort of questions. But i told my best friend in the whole entire world that i loved her last night and she totally freaked out and told me i couldnt love her and didnt know what love is and that i needed to take it back before someone's feelings got hurt. Her parents are going through a divorce and she doesnt trust relationships, but i just need some advice, cause i wasnt looking to break her heart. I really do.
4 AnswersSingles & Dating1 decade agoDo you think Senna foresaw his own death so to speak?
Senna was shaken at seeing how Roland was killed the day earlier. He addressed safety concerns before the race and did not look like himself right before the race. Im not saying he knew he was going to wreck, but i think maybe he almost had a feeling that something bad was going to happen, whether it happened to him or someone else. But comments he made throughout the year kind of makes it seem like he forshadowed his own death. Just wanted to get your guys input.
1 AnswerFormula One1 decade agoYou think Rusty Wallace has a personal vendetta against Jeff Gordon?
Its no secret the two didnt get along on or off the track. Rusty has and always will be jealous of the success that Jeff had. Everytime i watch the races Rusty either has something negative to say about Jeff or refuses to comment when they talk about Jeffs impressive career. Is he still mad that Jeff made that great pass on rusty to win the daytona 500 that year? Or is he upset that when Jeff came along it became Jeff V Dale not Rusty v Dale
15 AnswersNASCAR1 decade agoOpinions/Advice/on my poem. THANKS?
You make your move.
I’ll make mine.
Your eyes pierce my soul.
Yearning for control.
You try to manipulate.
Want me to cooperate.
I surrender to your needs.
With this you are pleased.
You now have the power.
You wrap your arms around me.
So tight I can hardly breathe.
Your fragrance controls my mind.
Sending my senses into a bind.
As you lean into kiss.
I notice your hiss.
Your fangs pierce my chest.
Your venom does the rest.
I can no longer fight.
You now have the right.
You stare at your conquest.
A devilish smirk appears.
As you ingest my tears.
3 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoCould Flavio provide Alonso with a competitive car?
Everyone has heard the rumor that Alonso may be on his way back to Renault. However, Renault is the 4th or 5th best team this year. Next year i think BMW Sauber will be a title contender along with Ferrari and Mclaren, is Renault's Alonso's best choice?
3 AnswersFormula One1 decade agoDoes NASCAR need to make a change?
You cant have a race in the chase end because of rain. This is a playoff and just like in any other sport there are different rules for the regular season than the post season. All races should be finished, I dont care if they have to stay until Monday. In football if you dont score in overtime the teams get a tie, but that doesnt apply during the playoffs so why does the rain rule apply. Tony backs into a win and it sickens me. NASCAR makes up the rules as they go along, why not make another rule up.
10 AnswersNASCAR1 decade agoFeedback/Opinions of my poem. Thanks.?
Never Was
I saw you the other day
It had been so long
Once filled with inspiration and grace
It was clear you had fallen on your face
Your dreams have become nightmares
The world you live in is your own personal hell
The rafters that hang over you have begun to give way
Like the sunset on a clear autumn day
You wonder will there be a tomorrow?
Or will today be the day
you’ve protected the ones who own you
you have ridiculed the ones who care
I asked why it has come to this.
You paused for a moment before answering
“I thought it was best”
You wonder why he left so long ago
Now you care for a kid that burdens your soul
You began to weep and fell to your knees
You asked God for forgiveness please
I asked why do you cry. It seems like it’s your fault
you looked at me as if my words were an insult.
You were surprised when I was not sympathetic
I said sympathy is for the feeble
you are just naïve
you thought there was good in everyone
this is where you were wrong.
Now you’re left wondering
Is this your swan song?
What’s it like when reality disappears?
Your mind feasts upon your fears.
Now you want help
now you inquire for my opinion
I believe my opinions count for little
however it’s hard to escape your lost potential
You were a would-have-been a should-have-been
Now you have lost your buzz
I guess you will always be a Never Was
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoRevised poem. What do you think?
You make your move
I’ll make mine.
Your eyes pierce my soul
Yearning for control
You try to manipulate
Want me to cooperate
I surrender to your needs
With this you are pleased
Now you have the power
You wrap your arms around me
So tight I can hardly breathe.
Your fragrance controls my mind
Sending my senses into a bind
As you lean into kiss
I notice your hiss
Your fangs pierce my chest
Your venom does the rest
I can no longer fight
You now have the right
You stare at your conquest
A devilish smirk appears
As you ingest my tears
7 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoCould you tell me what you think of my poem. Suggestions. Likes/Dislikes?
You make your move
I’ll make mine.
Your eyes pierce my soul
Trying to gain control
You try to manipulate
Want me to cooperate
I surrender to your needs
With this you are pleased
Now you have the power
You wrap your arms around me
So tight I can hardly breathe.
As you lean into kiss
I notice your hiss
I can no longer fight
You have all the might
You stare at your conquest
Now lifeless and lame
I lost the game.
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoIf Michael was in the Ferrari this year would Mclaren even be in contention for the championship?
Mclaren has had an amazing year. But in my opinion Ferrari has 2 mediocre drivers. Massa is ok. Raikonnen is a hack who couldnt win in champ car.
15 AnswersFormula One1 decade agoIf Scott Speed drove a Ferrari or a Mclaren would he be competitive.?
Lets face it, The car is essential to formula one success. Only the greats like Senna and Schumacher could take a mediocre car and somehow manage a podium. Scott has shown he can drive and nearly scored points in his first start.
17 AnswersFormula One1 decade agoRevised Poem...Opinions, Comments Please.?
Never Was
I saw you the other day
It had been so long
Once filled with inspiration and grace
It was clear you had fallen on your face
Your dreams have become nightmares
The world you live in is your own personal hell
The rafters that hang over you have begun to give way
Like the sunset on a clear autumn day
You wonder will there be a tomorrow?
Or will today be the day
You’ve protected the ones who own you
You have ridiculed the ones who care
I asked why it has come to this.
You paused for a moment before answering
“I thought it was best”
You wonder why he left so long ago
Now you care for a kid that burdens your soul
You began to weep and fell to your knees
You asked God for forgiveness please
I asked why do you cry. It seems like it’s your fault
You looked at me as if my words were an insult.
You were surprised when I was not sympathetic
I said sympathy is for the feeble
You are just naïve
You thought there was good in everyone
This is where you were wrong.
Now you’re left wondering
Is this your swan song?
What’s it like when reality disappears?
Your mind soon feeds upon your fears.
Now you want help
Now you inquire for my opinion
I believe my opinions count for little
However it’s hard to escape your lost potential
A could-have-been a should-have-been
A Never Was
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade ago