Danielle

Hey all,

Could you tell me what you think of my story and please be honest. You can be brutally honest just be helpful. If you like it, tell me what you like about it. If you don't like it, tell me what you don't like. Also feel free to give me suggestions for improving it. I'd like answers before 12:55. Please and thank you.

A couple is having a lovely time at the mall.

The man suddenly looks troubled and stops.

“Let’s leave. I’m hungry.” He grunts.

She looks at him bewildered by this sudden urgency but agrees.

Before they reach the exit a boy hugs the man.

“Daddy!!! You found us”

The man blanches.

Hey all,

Could you tell me what you think of my story and please be honest. You can be brutally honest just be helpful. If you like it, tell me what you like about it. If you don't like it, tell me what you don't like. Also feel free to give me suggestions for improving it.

A couple is having a lovely time at the mall.

The man suddenly looks troubled and stops.

“Let’s leave. I’m hungry.” He grunts.

She looks at him bewildered by this sudden urgency but agrees.

Before they reach the exit a boy hugs the man.

“Daddy!!! You found us”

The man blanches.

Alright so here's the background. I'm a 16 year old and I really like this girl. She's a junior and I'm a sophmore. She's way out of my league, but the thing is, she likes me too. I have never talked to her in person, we've seen each other, we talk on facebook, but whenever we see each other we get shy and look the other way.

I told her that we need to "at least say hi to each other without blushing" before winter break. She agreed, but the thing is, I have to start it. I had low confidence and I'm not sure of myself. I want to talk to her without sounding stupid or making a fool of myself.

Also I'm thinking of asking her to watch a movie with me or take a walk, and I don't want any awkward silences.

Basically, I need help talking to a girl I like. What should I do?

I have a crush on my teacher. She's pretty young because she is a student teacher. If she turns out to have any intrest in me, I want to know if it is illegal to have sexual relations with her. I am a 15 year old female. She is over 18 by the way.

I don't get many pimples but when I do I find myself scratching them, squeezing them, and even popping them. I know I shouldn't do it, but it kind of relieves stress, I even do it when I'm not realising that I am. I hate the scars I get, becasue they look nasty. Do you have any tips to stop me from popping them or keep the scars from happening?

I really want to contact Angelina and I can't seem to find anyway at all to talk to her. I am willing to send a letter, call, email, anything. Please help me.