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i am falling a little behind on my German so i thought that i would put this up for a review. if you would inform me of some of the mistakes i make in this text that would be perfect. i don't necessarily need to know how to fix it just the areas where i am going wrong so that i can fix it.

thanks in advance.

Wie lange fährst du normalerweise ohne Pause. Ich fahre selten länger als drei Stunden. Aber manchmal habe ich länger gefahren.

Der Künstler hat sein Hauptwerk in Berlin gestellt. Es hängt jetzt in München.

Der Dollar Kurs ist heute gefallen, augenblicklich fällt er täglich. Er ist seit September gefallen, aber vor September stieg er.

Wenn der Kurs steigt, wächst die Auslandsschuld des Betreibens. Wenn der Kurs fällt, fällt auch der Auslandsschulden. So was hängt sehr eng zusammen.

Die Archäologen haben lange vergeblich gegraben. Aber dann fanden sie was sie gesucht haben. Heute habe ich mein Auto gewaschen, ansonsten wäscht mein Sohn es immer. Das Gras wächst schnell; ich kann sehen, dass es seit gestern gewachsen ist.

Zwei Diebe wollten eine Villa plündern. Sie ließen ihr Wagen hinter dem Haus hallten. Sie trugen viele Dinge aus dem Haus, und luden das Wagen damit. Plötzlich hielt die Polizei vor das Haus. Die Diebe liefen, aber sie werden schnell gefangen, und die Polizisten ließen sie dann die Dinge zu dem Haus zurück tragen. Dann nehmen sie die Diebe auf das Polizeirevier.

keep in mind that this is low level german :)

mine is colors of the rainbow.

would it be possible to take a species and selectively breed them until they developed civilized manners a way to communicate with each other and other sentient species and enough brain power to exist and evolve as a sentient species?

i wrote this in what you could call a moment of "insanity" so please dont be to harsh to judge the ideas laid out. also i dont have good grammar skills so please dont point that out either.

anyway here it is:

My world:

My world is a bubble. Yes a bubble. I go to school every day and participate in an educational system designed to prepare me for the world, designed to design me! I am shaped altered and twisted to a tune that is played by more than a million people always and unknowingly shaping my path. I feel as if a dull tone of grey accompanied by a blanket of monotony has settled itself over my life shrouding me in what should be a perfect world, a perfect system. The system defines itself it shapes people to shape itself. the common opinion of more than seven billion people shapes my ideal picture of the world. A world of liberty, equality, productivity and progress. This is what I am supposed to want, and in a sense I do want it. And yet I feel trapped in a bubble a huge empty bubble of solitude people wander in and out of its boundaries, and some stay in it forever and I have myself a rather well populated and furnished bubble. And yet it is still a bubble. I feel like no amount of love happiness friendships or beauty can burst this figurative bubble of mine. Because beyond the bubble lies my true dreams. Dreams and ideas that will never come true, my true ideals unspoiled by the altering nature of the tune played by 7 billion. And I have no idea what the dreams consist of it is as if they are shrouded by the membrane of the bubble and I am unable to grasp them, unable to fully understand what I want. But even though I don’t know what lies beyond my bubble it whispers to me, tells me that what is inside is fake all my dreams and ideals are wrong. The product of a manipulative world. It calls to me and taxes me because I know I want to live my dreams but I also know that I will never be able to reach them in my lifetime. This writing is what you could either call a moment of clarity or a moment of insanity(depending on the viewpoint) and once I am done writing it I will continue to follow the dreams laid out by societies tune. Help build a nation that can manipulate the next generation and encase them in a bubble of their own.

And that is truly sad

my parents waited till i was about 9 years old before they introduced me to Christianity. they told me that many people in the world believed so and so and encouraged me to take some religious classes so i could learn about religion on my own but they always kept their own opinion to themselves. when i was 11 they asked me whether i wanted to be baptized and my answer was no. this meant that i was the only agnostic person in my class. i am very gratefull for my parents to have raised me that way.

however nowadays i see parents shoving religion down their children's throats as if they are afraid they might not be able to brainwash them in time for them to become impressionable. and i feel like it is wrong somehow, whenever i hear a child say something religious that they don't understand why they believe i just want to scream at the parents. is this the wrong way of thinking, is it OK to introduce your child to only one religion while they are young and leave the rest out? i feel like of you do this you are essentially running the child's life.

i am thinking of writing a book of a city beneath the sea, the city would be located in a deep trench dark enough to have evolved several extremely deadly and huge creatures not yet discovered by overground scientists. but for my book to work i should figure out how the underwater people get their power and i was thinking they could get it from electrolysis and the hydrogen they get could be burned for future energy consumption and more electrolysis would this be a possible scenario? i also need to know whether their are any other necessary components in the air for human survivial and how you would get them at the bottom of a trench.

i seem to remember watching a documentary with Steven Hawking saying that life developed relatively early in earths history, almost as soon as it was able to develop. if this is true than it seems like the probability of life to develop on its own would be relatively high. if it wasn't high it would have probably developed later right? so if this is true wouldn't it be relatively probable to find life on other planets?

i want to make great art, and with great art i mean stuff that will make me grin for hours on end just by thinking that i made it. i want to be good enough to accurately represent reality or draw an entire comic book. so is there anyone out there who is good at drawing and found a good way to learn. if so i want to hear what you did to develop your skills.

I'm open to extensive practice drawing classes and anything else in the spectrum.

I'm 16 btw

i am in need of some "vibram 4mm cherry sole material". i am going to be making myself a pair of sandals i only need this for the sole so it would have to be at least 12 times 35 inches if i had to make 2 pairs(i have large feet). i have looked on ebay unfortunately they have trouble excepting my credit card so that doesn't work. I'm not counting on anyone out there knowing what I'm talking about but if you know a good site that might have something like this please enlighten me.

i love music but i hate having to recharge my player does anyone know of a music player that doesn't require any recharging (solar heat static powered something like that)

or alternatively one that doesn't have to recharge very often

anything counts, my cousin said that i should pull an all nighter so now i have to!

i just don't know what to do

because I've heard from different sources that if i am drawing realism 2b is the best but others say that hb is best for drawing hair can someone please clarify?

so heres the skinny. i have a couple of friends that i always hang with at school lunches and such, and they recently told me that they hated one of the people i have befriended. this person i just met is the outgoing type and she has already asked me to her house three times. i feel like this is the kind of friendship that wont last. should i let her slide away from me because my friends don't like her or see where it goes and just deal with my friends.

and if i choose option number two how would i deal with them?

as most of you have probably already noticed the gas prices have been rising a little lately and are expected to top at about 5 dollars. also there seems to be extensive evidence that points to burning fossil fuels as a bad thing, not only in terms of climate change but its also supposed to be harmful to the ozone layer and the environment in the form of acid rain.

so heres what i was thinking: i know that it is possible to run a car of of electricity and i also know that this style has yet to be perfected so with work you could probably get really far per charge. i also know that there are almost unlimited reserves of natural energy like solar power wind and hydroelectric power. so how long will it be before gas will completely step aside to form way for electricity. will it ever happen?

well i was thinking the other night like so many others have done before me. and i thought to myself: if we assume that darwin was correct and that the human race is ever evolving naturally selected by who has the highest chance to survive than we would potentially keep improving ourselves over time. but with the elimination of natural selection today with all of the medication doctors and remedies is it possible that humans will loose some of the traits that are actually beneficial to us, like fx good eyesight. and is it possible that there would be dire consequences of this lack of selection or maybe just minor consequences.

input is greatly appreciated

well the way this works is i missed a week of school and i am way behind I'm looking for a website that could thoroughly teach me factoring and make me remember it.

i like running, writing, backrubs, biking, music, painting, drawing and hamburgers

so what does everyone else like? a few things will suffice

i'm currently not related to any religion but im open to new stuff

i've always wondered if there is a particular reason why people choose to believe in a certain deity and i was hoping that someone could tell me why they in particular believe in their religion of choice.

i've been thinking lately

if our universe is ever expanding, and from what i've heard it is, and at an exponential rate at that, wouldn't that mean that we some day "run out of" energy and matter. because there isn't any new matter or energy being introduced to the system, and the laws of physics state that matter and energy can neither be created or destroyed.

just a fluke of my mind i guess but nevertheless it seems to make sense to me