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I m writing a story about how a guy named Damion wants revenge because Carter stole his dream girl. The girl he loves. The only thing I can t figure out is why he is obsessed over her and what makes this girl different than others. Any suggestions?

Alright, so for English class, I choose to write a story about my life...only, most people in my school don't know I'm in foster care..So, I was wanting to write the story using a different girls name, and well...I'm in a pickle because I don't know how to start this story about a girl who just entered a foster home. Can you please help? :) Thanks.

How do I start a story about a teenager in the process of getting adopted? It's for English class and I wanted to write a story about this because there isn't many storues about a teenager getting adopted

So, for English we have to write a story and choose from anything we want. So, because I m in foster care and I m in the process to get adopted, I want to write my story on a teen getting adopted but I don t know how to start it. Please Help :)

I'm working on a story and I have no idea how to describe someone tapping their pencil....any ideas? Thanks in Advance :)

Do you know how to describe someone stalking your main character as they walk? Because I'm working on the next chapter of 'Serenity's End' and I don't know how to describe someone following behind Serenity as she's walking on the sidewalk late at night? The guy is going to end up being, the guy that plans on killing her boyfriend which is Damion, so I really need help writing this part? Can you please help me???

Okay, I answered every other question and now I'm just stuck on one last question and it's the last one that I got left to answer. It's about the book, 'Lord of the Flies' it says,

While part of the party searching for the Beast, Simon realizes that the notion of the Beast that the other boys have does not make sense. A Beast sitting atop a mountain with claws, a Beast who did not leave tracks, could have easily caught the twins. Simon has a different picture of the Beast: "there rose before his inward sight the picture of a human at once heroic and sick." How does this picture relate to the Beast that Samneric saw? How does it relate to what Simon said earlier about the beast being "only us"?

I'm writing a story in first person, and can't figure out how to describe the feeling my character gets when getting a tattoo. I want my readers to get that creepy vibe from him, by saying he felt pleasure when the needle went through his skin, but how could I describe that in first person? Thank in Advance. :)

I'm 15, and my best guy friend said he didn't like me dating my bf, but then right after he said that, he said that the song: Between the Raindrops By, Lifehouse. is our song, and I don't know, what does this mean?

I'm writing a story and right now there is someone that called on a broken cell phone, that they didn't think worked. And they answered it, and now a unrecognized, because it's hidden voice, like there using something to hide what their real voice sounds like which is on the other end of the phone, and I don't know how to describe his voice. This is what he said:

“...Why, hello there Serenity! I see you found my phone.”

Plus I'm not sure how she should react. Any ideas? Thanks in Advance :)

This is like the 9th chapter of my story so it may not make sense when you read it, but I was wondering how can I make this more showing instead of telling? Any Ideas? Thanks in Advance.

She wanted to stay with him! Out of all people, Alec! Just the thought of her staying there was a new guy, and Damion made me sick. But I'm glad I came up with a good excuse to get her to come with me. Who knows what those boys would've did if I let her stay with them. I thought to myself, and began to feel my lunch coming back up my system when thinking about it.

When we reached Serenity's house, I noticed that nothing had changed. Paint was splattered everywhere, and looking at her house in the day time looked even worse than what it did last night. Leaves scattered over the broken glass that glistened when the sun rays shined on it just right. Their bushes were turned a crimson red with parts of the green twigs showing, and you could almost picture someone running up to her house, and throwing water balloons filled with red paint at it.

After hours of cleaning what we could, we headed inside for a glass of water, and something to eat. That's when we stumbled upon a cell phone by the front door. It was broken, and the screen was shattered to bits. You could tell there was no way you could fix the gray touch screen cell phone. It was extremely broken, and their was no amount of super glue that could fix it at all. Serenity picked it up, and carried it inside. Placing it on the counter, she poured two glasses of water, and pulled out a bag of potato chips.

I'm writing this for English, so how can I make it sound better?

She wanted to stay with him! Out of all people, Alec! Just the thought of her staying there was a new guy, and Damion made me sick. But I'm glad I came up with a good excuse to get her to come. Who knows what those boys would of did if I let her stay. I thought to myself, and began to feel my lunch coming back up when having those thoughts.

When we reached Serenity's house, I noticed that nothing was changed. Paint was splattered everywhere, and looking at her house in the day time looked even worse than what it did last night. Leaves scattered over the broken glass, their bushes were turned a crimson red with parts of it's green showing, and their house looked as though someone threw balloons filled with red paint at it.

After hours of cleaning what we could outside, we headed inside for a glass of water, and something to eat. That's when we stumbled upon a cell phone by the front door. It was broken, and the screen was shattered to bits, there was no way fixing the gray touch screen cell phone was possible. It was extremely broken, and their was no amount of super glue that could fix it at all. Serenity picked it up, and carried it inside. Placing it on the counter, she poured two glasses of water, and pulled out a bag of potato chips.

I'm writing this for English, and the cell phone they found is going to ring even though it's broken. Here's what I'm working on:

She wanted to stay with him! Out of all people, Alec! Just the thought of her staying there was a new guy, and Damion made me sick. But I'm glad I came up with a good excuse to get her to come. Who knows what those boys would of did if I let her stay. I thought to myself, and began to feel my lunch coming back up when having those thoughts.

When we reached Serenity's house, I noticed that nothing was changed. Paint was splattered everywhere, and looking at her house in the day time looked even worse than what it did last night. Leaves scattered over the broken glass, their bushes were turned a crimson red with parts of it's green showing, and their house looked as though someone threw balloons filled with red paint at it.

After hours of cleaning what we could outside, we headed inside for a glass of water, and something to eat. That's when we stumbled upon a cell phone by the front door. It was broken, and the screen was shattered to bits, there was no way fixing the gray touch screen cell phone was possible. It was extremely broken, and their was no amount of super glue that could fix it at all. Serenity picked it up, and carried it inside. Placing it on the counter, she poured two glasses of water, and pulled out a bag of potato chips.

So, how can I make this sound better? Any Ideas? Thanks in Advance :)

How would you describe a broken cell phone like it's shattered screen and that by looking at it?

I'm writing a horror/mystery story and my character's find this broken cell phone which is going to ring and scare them, but I'm not sure how to describe the broken, shattered screened cell phone, any ideas? Thanks in Advance :)

In this story I'm writing Serenity is remembering back to a time when she was in a classroom and Carter was trying to get the courage to talk to her. How could I describe what the classroom smells like? I was thinking it be History class. Thanks In Advance :)

I'm writing a story and Carter is looking for the girl he loves, but he feels like all hopes are lost when he can't find Serenity. She was there in the guest room last night, before he fell asleep but then when he fell asleep on the floor she and woke up in the morning she was gone. How would I describe his feelings? So far he's looking for her, and can't find her, and it hasn't been twenty-four hours yet so he can't call the cops. How could I describe his feelings, with his actions? Any ideas, Thanks in Advance :)

When writing a story, I suppose everyone runs out of ideas every once in awhile right? Right! Well, what do you do to get your ideas flowing back? And what keeps you inspired to write?

Just Thought I'd Ask :)

Thanks In Advance

No I'm not cheating i just need some clarification. I'm working on a lab report on cross section in the Grand Canyon.

Number 1 is :Interpret the bottom half of the cross section below. Start with the Vishnu Schist and end with the Redwall Limestone.

I have answered the order of rocks and the environmental changes.

But it also says: Attention to detail and completeness. What does this mean?

Just details that I've noticed? please explain for me. if you can help in any way, it would be much appreciated... thx