heartbroken

this is only the first chapter. let me know what u think

Nineteen-year-old Violet Miquidum was busy typing on her two year old baby blue laptop while humming. She wasn't typing a paper for college, it was summer and Violet wasn't in college yet. She had always dreamed of going to Athena University in Colombia, Missouri. Violet loved singing and was the best in the high school choir. Once, she took one of her many compositions to her teacher, Mr. Pertear. Now Violet was one year out of high school. Violet had gotten a choir scholarship to Athena University and applied as soon as she could. The only thing standing in the way of Violet going was her mother, Molly Mecole. Molly had never gone to college and held a full-time job as the manager of Target. Violet worked full-time as a cashier at Target to earn money to cover whatever funds her father and the scholarship didn't cover.

"Violet! Get down here right now!" Molly angrily shouted. Violet quicky closed out of her program, shut down the laptop and shoved it in its aqua messanger bag. Robert had mailed the bag to Violet for her twentieth birthday from Switzerland, where he was working on a new movie. Robert worked as a director for . After speeding down the spiral staircase that connected her attic room to the rest of the house, Violet got the usual welcome. Shortly before thier separation, Robert had the staircase build so Violet didn't have to climb a ladder to get to her room. Molly had said it was a waste of money, but Robert had the staircase built anyway. That drove Molly to the edge. Violet, who was nine at the time, would never forget that night. Molly was fighting with Robert, who as she claims, 'spoiled Violet beyond control.' Violet never took anything for granted and alway thanked Robert for what he got her. It was true that Robert spoiled Violet, but it was becouse one day, Robert left one of his many video cameras running and nobody knew. The video camera caught a normal day of Molly treating Violet like a servant. When he saw what was on the tape, Robert confronted Molly and she claimed that she was preparing Violet for the real world. Violet and Robert knew Molly cared nothing about Violet in the real world. That was the night Robert had left. He promised he would visit every month, but because of his job, he rarly could. Whenever Robert didn't show, Molly told Violet that he didn't care and loved making her miserable. Violet knew it wan't true, but there was no point in arguing with Molly.

"Make yourself useful and make dinner." Molly snapped.

Violet made dinner and was happier than usual because she was going to Athena University the next morning.

The next morning, Violet awoke with a strange feeling. As soon as she got out of bed, she checked everywhere except her closet. She flung open the doors and gasped. There, in her closet, stood a grinning Robert Miquidum. He stepped out and gave his daughter the bear hug she still missed.

my brother is thinking about joining the Navy and I'm just worried. When I think about all the families that have lost a loved one, I'm reminded that it could be me mourning my brother's death. I know I've wished my brother would go away sometimes, but not to die. please NO funny or goofy or rude comments. please help put my mind to some ease. any appropriate bible verse is welcomed.

thanks. sorry if this is too long.

theres this guy in my gym class that is a creepy jerk. he's a kinda fat but im nice to him and i never talk 2 him unless i absoulutly have 2. 2day in gym, i was getting golf balls from the field and i got the good kind (cuz we were golfing with plastic and foam balls and there are good balls and bad balls) and he comes up 2 me just as i got to my spot and he took my bucket and dumped my golf balls out onto his pile. then his partner was all wtf?! and grabbed my golf balls plus a few extra and gave them back. two days ago, this jerk was following me around. he followed me to my locker and to my classes until a teacher told him to knock it off. only a few people can stand him and im not one of them. he's driving me crazy. on friday he wore a girls shirt that said "stop checking me out" it was creepy

i have had very little detail in what i have seen. i need more detail.

I met him at a church camp in july. When i asked 4 a pic with him, he told me to email it to him. we have been emailing each other ever since. more like i email him, he responds, i reply to his response, ect. am i just bugging the crap out of him? i need help!