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Its meant to be a valentines day gift, but i dont know if its the right kind of poem. The girl it is for has been in relationships before, and feels like she cant trust that i feel the way i do. shes heard the things ive said to her, and i want to show her, im not just saying these things. the poems called realize me

You’ve been here before

but not I

I do this for you,

realize me

You’ve heard it before

but from my mouth not.

These words are from my heart

realize me

You’ve felt this before

but your touch.

Methodical it is,

leaves me breathless

realize me

My thoughts aren’t straight

Yet they are true

realize me

i realize you

is it too crude?

I also wrote this. its called There's Beauty in Your Ways

gentle in the way of your mind

noble in what it wants

a palace of integrity

a home for me to stay

brusque in your way with words

with quick remarks i’ll play

graceful in the way you move

lithe with your touch

a bed of warmth

with heat i’ll lay

alluring in your entirety

you’ve coaxed me to say

Alexandria

will you be my valentine?

I like this one alot, but what do you think? which should i use? should i give her both?