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My mother had always told me that someday Charlie was going to be bigger than me and therefore be able to beat me, but I didn’t believe that Charlie would be this strong just because he was a bit bigger.

I think I might need commas before and/or after someday and also after the me before and therefore.

Some of these might not need any.

I have to pin him soon or I’m not going to have the strength to keep him down!

In the above sentence, I'm not sure if I need a comma after soon.

I jumped up on the couch and looked down at Charlie who was taking the moment to catch his breath

In this sentence I think I should maybe put one after couch and after Charlie.

“Yeah, right!” I yelled sarcastically as I jumped up on top of Charlie.

On this one I think I should put one after sarcastically but I'm not sure.

Instead, I just curled into a ball and tried catch my breath

after ball?

My mother had always told me that someday Charlie was going to be bigger than me and therefore be able to beat me, but I didn’t believe that Charlie would be this strong just because he was a bit bigger.

Before and after someday? After me?

Now as I look back on that day.

After now.

I had not noticed Charlie getting bigger and stronger until I had put myself in a situation where it would be a problem.

After stronger?

I know it's a long question, but I really need some help with this. I really appreciate it.

I’ve always been able to beat him in the past so doing it again should be no problem!

I am not sure if I should add a comma after past.

Charlie was two years younger than me so I figured the advantage was mine, though recently he had started growing very quickly and was almost as big as me.

I think I might need to add a comma before and.

I had all of my strongest Pokemon cards that I had just received for my tenth birthday out on the table.

I think maybe after that and after birthday but I am not sure.

The 2007 servers are full of bots now :(. I was wondering if maybe there was a way I could lure a few and kill them. If anyone has any ideas on how to do this please share!

Explain in Layman's terms please.

I pre-ordered black ops 2 and lost the receipt. Do they have me in the computer or something so I can still get it tomorrow along with Nuketown 2025?

I know almost nothing about the topic so a detailed answer would be great.

If I want to get my video monetized I heard I have to create my own music. I don't have any way of doing this so I was wondering if anyone knows of someone who lets other people use his/her music

I kinda want to get a structure (or I could get 2 if it would be better.) I am completely new and have no idea which structures are good and which are bad. I do like the angel cards that my friend let me use 1 time but idk if those are good or if that deck is even still around.

How do people get good audio in movies and stuff but you never see the mic?

I have an infinite life combo in yugioh. I play birdman, activate imperial iron wall and spring of rebirth, then I return 2 birdmen over and over... is it within the rules for me say I repeat 100 million times or do I have to play it 100 million times?

I was reading an interesting book and they showed this example.

In the sentence I'm here aren't I? If you broke it down it would be I am here are I not? Wouldn't a word like amn't (which I believe is VERY old slang or something) work better for things like this?

I'm not very good but I would like to learn a cool song on guitar that I can just play for fun. Acoustic or electric is fine.

I don't mean how long it takes to learn a language. How long does the average person spend studying or learning a language in school or wherever.

It has a girl on it who has a purple mark... (tattoo maybe?) Its on her cheek and from what I've seen it looks like she is always wearing a hat though I could be wrong since I've only seen a few clips in music videos.

What if 10 years from now some government or something learned how to travel through time. They decided to go back our time to fix some screw up or something. Wouldn't they have forgotten all about their problem since they went back in time before they knew about it??? They would then discover time travel again and go back in time once again creating an infinite loop.

Does this make sense????

I have an electric guitar and want 2 learn a new song, though I am not very good. The hardest stuff I can play is sweet child o mine and some green day stuff. What is a song that you think is at my level?

I'm interested in writing a novel but am having a bit of trouble figuring out how I should start... Any tips would be greatly appreciated.