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Please grade my descriptive essay and comment on it?
Describe a scene at a firework display:
Dancing above in the sky were bright sparks of colours which illuminated the dark, black sky. The night was filled with loud and colourful explosions of flickering ignite in the atmosphere. It was like a dance of colours above us. It seemed as if the sun was shining bright at night and we had a “sunny night” instead of “sunny day!” The glimmering sparks of fire looked as vivid as a shelf full of food colours. I could smell gunpowder tickling my nose and the strong dust hugging my face from all that blazing hot air. Brightening the black sky, the stunning, multi-coloured streaks of light glittered the darkness like a paint palette being poured in crackling fire. Glints were reaching up high like a colourful kangaroo hopping for food available above its height. Massive star-shaped twinkles whizzed around and around as multiple explosions of flames happened together in the sky. The shining lines of colour fought with each other as they pushed one another to be the centre of attention amongst the screaming crowds who carefully stared into the spectacular beauty of the bright flashes restlessly searching for the most fine-looking fiery flame. Flared in the sky were the flamboyant stripes of hot....roaring and sizzlinghue releasing scorching smoke as the cool air slapped the calming fire-material.
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I left everything to the last minute. Including revision. Revision for 3 separate exams.
I'm really angry at myself.
Even if I can sleep that will be for like 30 minutes or so.
How do I nap so short? It takes me 15 mins to sleep!
Anyways wish me luck and give me tips on how to cram all that revision fast?!!!
I'm damn nervous and I wanna kill myself right now! So upset.
Help I need to pass my exams
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Okay so say if I missed out on a bunch of class notes and I use just CGP revision guides and other ones such as Pearson.
And I use workbooks, do past paper questions use flash cards from guides then is it possible to pass my Geography exam? With a high grade?
Plus get a little bit of tutoring. Plus I'll use both foundation and higher revision guides!
Like 2 hours.
Don't ask why I missed so much lessons I was really ill.
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I need them to grow back ASAP! I have school on Monday and I urgently need them to grow back this week as I have to go out! Ugh damn! :(
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http://i.imgur.com/XtuL0rz.jpg
Okay so I threaded my right eyebrow (in the pic) a bit too much and made it look too short because it had some ugly stray hairs that never grew so I just removed them.
Now they look uneven and the shapes are so different. I will get them groomed and stuff but do short eyebrows look okay? I'm planning to make the longer eyebrow short as the other one because one long and one short looks odd. I just don't want to look weird. What do I do? Or how do I grow eyebrow hairs in a week?
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I've lost 5 kg in 2 months just due to stress.
I'm 15.
I want to kill myself. I don't want to live. I want to die. The only problem is that I don't want to hurt my mom.
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