ZombieSandwich

I had a homework assignment to write an invitation in Japanese, and I've been struggling a little bit in the class. I was hoping I could get someone to tell me if there's any corrections I need to make, thank you in advance!

山田さん、

こにちは！

今週の木曜日に私のグラジュエイション・パーティがあるんです。私の友だちだから、来ませんか。２時にはじまります、それから７時おわります。　うちであります。

ありがとうございます。じゃまた！

ムレー

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