Alyssa

For an event we played messy twisted with paint and it was washable. I rather like how my shirt turned out and was wondering how to make sure I dont wash the colors out when I wash it.

I am planning to cosplay as Female Marco the Phoenix from One Piece and I'm trying to figure out how I can add the Phoenix's blue flames to the costume. I'm not sure how to make them and ever ying I've read or watched includes fans and lighting but that's not quite possible on a costume.... I was thinking the fire would go up the arms maybe...I'm not sure.

I'm sorry for the rambling. I guess my question is does anyone have any idea how I could make faux flames for this cosplay.

Thank you for taking your time to answer.

I am currently trying to teach myself Japanese. And, truth be told, it isn't working too well. I mean I can introduce myself and greet someone at all times of the day but, that is about it. So, I was wondering if anyone had any advice or resources (that won't cost an arm and a leg) that could help me.

To all those who take the time, thank you very much.

I have a friend who is going to put music on my ipod. so when i hook it back up to my computer and therefore itunes will anything happen?

neither of us have the cd's her music is downloaded from the computer and i cannot download things onto my computer.

so will my itunes library be erased? will the songs disappear form my ipod? will all of my music be deleted? i don't know what could happen, i've never done this.

thank you everyone

I seriously don't know what to do with the idea. . .none of my friends aren't helping and i really want to do something with it. i know i have a lot of figuring out to do. . .please do not comment on how little i actually have on this idea. . basically i have characters, and that about it. Also i don't want to hear about as a writer that I should come up with my own ideas but i need help getting theis one off the ground.

characters:

Name: Alice

The goddess Zora, of immortality resides in her consciousness...when she dominates her concous Alice's usually black eyes turn purple.

Name: Dante

The god of fire/hell/demons (i haven't decided) , Xavier resides in his conciousness and when he takes over Dante's concious hie usually green eyes turn red/orange.

the goddess and god are enemies(again i've yet to figure out why) and the girl and guy will end up(in the end) falling in love

but the story is getting there and how they deal with their second concious dealing with that. . . that and i need a villa maybe someone who want's to extract the god/goddess from within them. . possibly killing the character.

please do not comment on my grammar . . . i know it's bad and that's not the question.

And to those who helped a little thanks

i seriously don't know what to do with the idea. . .none of my friends are helping and i really want to do something with it. i know i have a lot of figuring out to do. . .please do not comment on how little i actually have on this idea. . basicallyy i have characters, and that about it.

characters:

Name: Alice

The goddess Zora, of immortality resides in her consciousness...when she dominates her concous Alice's usually black eyes turn purple.

Name: Dante

The god of fire/hell/demons (i haven't decided) , Xavier resides in his conciousness and when he takes over Dante's concious hie usually green eyes turn red/orange.

the goddess and god are enemies(again i've yet to figure out why) and the girl and guy will end up(in the end) falling in love

but the story is getting there and how they deal with their second concious dealing with that. . . that and i need a villa maybe someone who want's to extract the god/goddess from within them. . possibly killing the character.

please do not comment on my grammar . . . i know it's bad and that's not the question.

Please do not comment on my grammar, I know it's bad. Anyways i hope you enjoy:

There are two girls, angels, Ebony and Ivory, who angels. Ivory is the one who has white blond hair and silver eyes. And then there's her sister Ebony who has black hair and purple eyes. Both of them are assigned to be guardian angels.Ivory is guardian boy who had a hard life. And then Ebony is guarding a little girl who satan is trying to get but it's the girl's brother that she is more worried about, he's on the fast track to damnation.God Finds out about Ivory who has fallen in love with the boy she's guarding, a sin in itself and casts her out of heaven because of it she's slowly becoming more human-like, feeling emotions such as pain and committing sins. Ebony is very upset about her sister and her falling from heaven. Will she make the same mistakes as her sister did? Will she fall into the same trap and fall too?

The more I find new non-main stream and foreign music (bands and songs) the more I find that Itunes doesn't have what i want. Does anyone have any alternative sites (besides limewire and rhapsody) to Itunes that are safe and not too expensive? Also I don't know if this matters but i have an ipod 4(or 5th ) generation so it has to work with that.

please and thanks for your help.

Is this intro too cliche? is it bad? please tell me i'm considering writing this ad the intro to a story so i want opinions of it.

Like a moth, I was drawn into his flame. He was the beginning of my ending. If only I had known that before we had met, I would have avoided him, refused to show him around the school until he knew his way around the school. There are so many things I could have done to avoid him. But I didn’t/ hadn’t known at the time so I agreed to showing him around, agreed on meeting him, let myself be entranced by him.

thanks for your opinions

The question is pretty straight forward, i'd like hontest to god opinions fo this story....or the first page of it at least. If you hate it tell me, tell me what i can do to make it better because telling me you don't like it with out constructive critism is not going to help me get any better at writing.

Thank you.

Title: Raven Feather

Gewn's life started in a lab with a single and a mistake.

"Dr.Aaron get your child under control." The cold Dr. Missy comanded the youngest, newest member to thier team.

"Yes ma'am." he said catching his little girl as she ran past him, playing airplane with the single black feather.

Pressing the white button on the intercom system Dr.Aaron said "Miss. Nora please come to lab room 108." Not five minutes later the door slid open and Nora lead the little girl out of the room after handing the feather back to Dr. Missy who looked down her nose at the child who stuck her tounge out at her as the door slid shut.

"Dr. Aaron why did you bring your child to work with you today?" Dr. Missy asked. Everything about her was cold. Her persian blue eyes flecked with slate grey, her flawlessly smooth pale porcilen skin, slender cat like body structure and pale white blond hair pulled sharply back, not a single strand of hair out of place.

"Please forgive me. The daycare cought fire and was deemed unsafe for anyone and my wife couldn't take a day off to watch Turquoise."

She glaired at him and cooly said "We are not a daycare, do not let it happen again. Are you ready to preform to preform test number 984?"

"Ready." he confirmed.

"Alright do it." Dr. Missy told him sliding her protective goggles over her eyes.

For a moment nothing happened before a bright light filled the room, blinding everyone. no one could see what was causing the loud ripping sound that shook the room. The sound ended with a loud, high pitched, piercing seream of a woman. The light suddenly dissappeared with a loud pop. When the light was gone the scream ended abruptly and Dr. August turned on the back-up lights.

With the sudden light the doctors in the room sheilded their eyes until they adjusted. when their eyes did adjust a few seconds later they saw a heap of black feathers with a small river of orange cascading from the feathers.

10 years ago

Zaida ran as fast as she could away from her house. Everything and everyone had been covered in their own blood the creature who had done the damage still lurking over her family.

The image of her brother and three sisters piled in a heap like dirty clothes was branded into her mind and the even worse image of her parents ripped to shreds laying eyes still open but dead was going to scar her memory forever.

Whatever the creature was it was now after her that was for sure. But nothing followed her. maybe it was waiting for the right moment to attack.....maybe it wasn't.

There was a rustle in the undergrowth, now even more terrified Zaida picked up her speed which wasn't fast, not compared to that of a monster or the creature that had killed her life.

Something picked Zaida up and held her tightly. All she could see besides very pale perfect milky skin was the crimson blood that stained it.

She screamed and began wiggling and thrashing before it could hurt her. But it's grip didn't loosen.

The girl's name is Zaidas (Z-ai-da) who is 7 or so when this happens to her.

What do you people think of this? Do You LIke it? What would you change?

This Question is about how you liked the story, not that grammar or the spelling, please and thanks.

The Question says it all.......except for the part where i add is this good or really weird.

Ok so i'm NOT asking about grammar or spelling(i know i suck at both therefore do not comment on either of those)

Ok then here it is(also no questions about what the people may or may not be):

Kailyn was created to replace someones lover but no matter how hard she tries she can never get it right, no mater the consequence.

Zane was raised where drowning in pain and hate was nothing new. He had been shipped from detention home to mental hospital and on his own then back again, an endless cycle for him. So Zane was transferred to a man-made island to be confined for the rest of his life.

The island was a gift for the Daughter of Kailyn creator. However now Kailyn is now being confined there too because her Creator is fed up with her mistakes.Both zane and Kailyn are held in cells across from each other so what happens when they discover each other? Will they escape or get caught?

Thought of title: Living Mistake, Not/Never good enough

Character: Zane

Character:Kailyn

Character: creator(have yet to some up with a name for him)

Character: possibly more to come, maybe not.

So please give me your opinions and I'm sorry if this is a lot to read, skim it and give me your opinion. What are some things you'd change if you could? or things you'd do to make it better?

The Question says it all.......except for the part where i add is this good or really weird.

Ok so i'm NOT asking about grammar or spelling(i know i suck at both therefore do not comment on either of those)

Ok then here it is(also no questions about what the people may or may not be):

Kailyn was created to replace someones lover but no matter how hard she tries she can never get it right, no mater the consequence.

Zane was raised where drowning in pain and hate was nothing new. He had been shipped from detention home to mental hospital and on his own then back again, an endless cycle for him. So Zane was transferred to a man-made island to be confined for the rest of his life.

The island was a gift for the Daughter of Kailyn creator. However now Kailyn is now being confined there too because her Creator is fed up with her mistakes.Both zane and Kailyn are held in cells across from each other so what happens when they discover each other? Will they escape or get caught?

thought of title: Living Mistake, Not/Never good enough

character: Zane

character:Kailyn

character: creator(have yet to some up with a name for him)

character: possibly more to come, maybe not.

So please give me your opinions and I'm sorry if this is a lot to read, skim it and give me your opinion.

Thank you.

Ok so the question says it all, i cannot think of what i should call this character so here's the description

A 15-16 year old boy who always wore the same dark red hoodie(sp?) that was never zipped up with the hood up. Black earphones hung in his ears. His eyes were dark blue, almost violet in color but were mostly hidden by the dark hair that swooped over into them.

This question is not abot grammar or if you like the character.....which is a guy by the way.... the quest simply what would you name this character.(sorry if i'm coming off as rude but some people don't answer the question i'm asking which annoys me)

Also please don't say dominic,dante,daemon, trevor or devon( i have my reasons so dont ask)

thank you for your answers (:

i need some help the club i joined does cos play and i have never cos played before. one i don't know who to be and two i cant afford much.

i've got light blond hair and am a girl.

any tips?

Two demons are cast out of hell (can someone help me there) and are told that the only way back is to find the cleanest/purest sole (sp?) among humans and convert it into complete darkness/evil.

The problem? How are you supposed to dirty the purest/cleanest human soal when they have a guardian angel?

Characters-

Daemon-demon

Dominic-daemon's brother

kaylyn- the one with the purest soal

Zack- the guardian angel

So far no one falls hopelessly in love(if anyone was wandering). All the demon brothers really want to do is get back to hell(their home).

I believe that this will be a decent sized story. Also if you were to change this what would yo do to 'fix' or tweak it?what would you add or take away to make it better? and NO comments about grammar...or spelling.

The question itself is pretty self explanatory. Tell me what they are and what they look and if they do anything like are omens of death or have amy powers if any. Oh and do NOT I REPEAT NOT say vampires, fairies, werewolves, demons or anything like that.

Thanks

I'm not looking for anything big just like a sentence or a scenario.

And before you answer that no one had any reason to help me because a good writer wouldn't ask for help i want to see what people want to read about or what they would write about themselves. I am currently writing my own story but when i'm done with it i want something to dive into.

Is it too much to ask for? Just a short scenario and/or sentence/ beginning to the story?

I dont want characters, plot twist the background of a characters life, where/ when they live just a sentence like 'scared she ran as fast as she could away from the group of people who had been trailing her for the last week. if she could just make it to school she'd be safe.'

That's it nothing long(Iike this question). Is the question clear? i want a short story starter or a scenario.

Please be honest if it sucks please tell me just don't be too incredibly mean about it, tell me how to fix it or what would make it better.

Also this is a plot/story line. The character is a 16 year old girl whose name is Tayua(tay-u-a)

Tayua knows when she was born. the date, the day of the week and the exact time down to the second. She also knows when she was created.

Now on a mission to live life to fullest she sets out with a list of things to do, people to see and places to go. Some of the things on that list are bungee jumping, sky diving, jumping off a cliff, flying, going to school, learning three languages, seeing some live concerts and meeting the singers, go to space,and read tons of great books. Not on her list of things to do are/is falling in love, being chased and hunted and/or dieing before her time. Can she do half of the things she wants to do before she expires? And can she escape those who want to end her life before it's supposed to end?

please no answers about grammar. the question ISN'T how good/bad is my grammer in this story line. oh and please ignore any spellling mistakes of mine(i'm positively the worst speller in the world) because that is not the question either.

thankyou for your candid opinions

this question is NOT about grammar and where i should or shouldn't put commas. it's not about my spelling either. make only comments about the short plot below.thank you.

Two demons are cast out of hell (i've yet to come up with why so don't ask) and are told that the only way back is to find the cleanest/purest sole (sp?) among humans and convert it into complete darkness/evil.

however it's not as simple as that.

i'm in 6th grade i cannot spell and have no talents anywhere near grammar. i enjoy writing but want more then my bff's opinion.

also if you were to 'fix' or tweak it just a bit what would you do to it? why?