How much do you like this song I wrote and what do you think of it?

A guy starts walking down the street looking for someone to meet. When I see him standing there I just stare. So, he walks up to me and says "Hey, babe want to go on a date?" and I said "Sorry, it's too late." and he asked me why. I just couldn't tell him the truth nor a lie. So, I just said goodbye.

2008-02-05T13:43:57Z

The song is unfinished. I am still working on it.

trickout1002008-02-05T13:58:02Z

Favorite Answer

look babe you gotta get rythm and rhyme. And just pass the time.

Missy S2008-02-05T21:30:11Z

Well, don't you think it is a little short? I started a band and we don't even have a name yet. We wrote a really good song. It is called "Life Is A Story Book."