(Love Like There's) No Tomorrow - Comments?

Outside, my wind chimes
Answer the breathing sky
Random lyrics that soothe my soul.
Inside, the music we’ve chosen
To surround our venturing astral selves
Rings into our auras,
Singing us to slumber and back.

I’ve risen to appease my muse’s call
On this pristine canvas
While you sleepy-slip over to my pillow,
Languidly snuggling the phantom of my perfume,
Your face serene amid lush pillows
And blankets' billow.

The pain of your leaving is no less,
But I turn my back on tomorrow
And refuse.
Instead,
Crawling back into bed,
I give substance to
The vacant place in our sheets,
Embracing with my whole heart
One more now
While you hold me.

Dockerz2008-02-22T22:01:32Z

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its really good!
well done!!!!

Astrid2008-02-23T13:25:29Z

You can come up with a much better title, judging by your well written poetry.

Anonymous2008-02-23T07:59:01Z

This is a very good, poetic endeavor. I can feel it & I know it as well

Anonymous2008-02-23T07:33:09Z

it was like you was telling my feeinqs in your poem...i loved it..i felt the rythem of the poem....that was just eautiful keep writing

smile 2 d world2008-02-23T09:20:06Z

only 3 letters to describe it: WOW! well done ;)