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(Love Like There's) No Tomorrow - Comments?

Outside, my wind chimes

Answer the breathing sky

Random lyrics that soothe my soul.

Inside, the music we’ve chosen

To surround our venturing astral selves

Rings into our auras,

Singing us to slumber and back.

I’ve risen to appease my muse’s call

On this pristine canvas

While you sleepy-slip over to my pillow,

Languidly snuggling the phantom of my perfume,

Your face serene amid lush pillows

And blankets' billow.

The pain of your leaving is no less,

But I turn my back on tomorrow

And refuse.

Instead,

Crawling back into bed,

I give substance to

The vacant place in our sheets,

Embracing with my whole heart

One more now

While you hold me.

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    its really good!

    well done!!!!

  • Astrid
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    You can come up with a much better title, judging by your well written poetry.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    This is a very good, poetic endeavor. I can feel it & I know it as well

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it was like you was telling my feeinqs in your poem...i loved it..i felt the rythem of the poem....that was just eautiful keep writing

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  • 1 decade ago

    only 3 letters to describe it: WOW! well done ;)

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