is this poem good?
Out of 10 (10 being the best) what do you think
Because of what you've done
What you've become
I'd give my life to anyone
For one more night
Gold among silver
A rose among grass
You are my diamong
Among rocks
Out of 10 (10 being the best) what do you think
Because of what you've done
What you've become
I'd give my life to anyone
For one more night
Gold among silver
A rose among grass
You are my diamong
Among rocks
lel_465
Favorite Answer
The verse rhymes quite well and i think it might sound good as a lyric but i'm not sure what you are trying to say did they become , what they've become because of the night spent with you, or ....? Its not clear
sillylady
very nice poem!
SuperCharlene
I'd say 7.5 :]