Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.
Trending News
is this poem good?
Out of 10 (10 being the best) what do you think
Because of what you've done
What you've become
I'd give my life to anyone
For one more night
Gold among silver
A rose among grass
You are my diamong
Among rocks
3 Answers
- 1 decade agoFavorite Answer
The verse rhymes quite well and i think it might sound good as a lyric but i'm not sure what you are trying to say did they become , what they've become because of the night spent with you, or ....? Its not clear
