A hue of calmness Of serenity and peace Inspired by grace and well being Music Laughter Harmony comes to mind Singing birds Flowers of the field Serenaded by honeybees Life continues to flourish I hear the voice of life all around me Like an eternal whisper in my ear I close my eyes Lay down on the sands of time At the shores of my memories Breathing deeply On a day where the skies are a brilliant blue
Gawdless Heathen2008-03-25T00:27:04Z
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It is a beautiful poem, I showed it to my wife who started laughing hysterically and said "he can't possibly be talking about you can he?"
I was trying to find a line even that sort of described me but I actually couldn't. Actually this might describe me 2 weeks a year out of the city on vacation. I do know it was about the name and not the person but I am glad the name brought you inspiration..
The poem is eloquent and so moving. Did you recently have a baby or is this from an experience? I've told you before and I will tell you again, you need to do something with your poetry. You could easily find a publisher. This one is just plain lovely. Congrats are due you if you did have a child. God is good. Praise be to God.
A beautiful poem indeed my friend. Brilliant Blue does not reflect a lot of this in his posts, but he does raise some interesting questions. I would be intrigued to know how he would respond to this. I closed my eyes and sighed with the imagery induced calm I received from the eloquence of your words. God has given you such a profound gift! I love to read your poetry. Love and God bless, Pami