A short poem inspired by the name Brilliant Blue?

It is a beautiful poem, I showed it to my wife who started laughing hysterically and said "he can't possibly be talking about you can he?"

I was trying to find a line even that sort of described me but I actually couldn't. Actually this might describe me 2 weeks a year out of the city on vacation. I do know it was about the name and not the person but I am glad the name brought you inspiration..

The poem is eloquent and so moving. Did you recently have a baby or is this from an experience? I've told you before and I will tell you again, you need to do something with your poetry. You could easily find a publisher. This one is just plain lovely. Congrats are due you if you did have a child. God is good. Praise be to God.

A beautiful poem indeed my friend. Brilliant Blue does not reflect a lot of this in his posts, but he does raise some interesting questions. I would be intrigued to know how he would respond to this. I closed my eyes and sighed with the imagery induced calm I received from the eloquence of your words. God has given you such a profound gift! I love to read your poetry. Love and God bless, Pami

This is beautiful poetry. I don't often log on Semper Fi, reborn, and when I do, and I see one of your poems it lifts my heart.

Thank you.

Nice! I can smell the ocean. ((((smile))))

For my birthday, someone just gave me a framed picture that reads, "Laughter is the Music of the Heart." Your poem just reminded me of that.

God bless you.

It's beautiful. I wouldn't change a word.

If you've seen any of my critiques, this is a rare compliment.

Oh beautiful

Such a beautiful poem, well done.

Good job.

Wow, that was beautiful.

Very nice work:)