My poem the darkest woods it is dark .Not for under 16?

There i was in the dark
howling woods sounds of laughter
filled the air.

All i seen were shadows in shiny black
with blood and sulfur
seeping from the sacks

I thought i was dreaming with
all the screaming
from the coffins in the woods.

They were sing they were screaming
chants from long ago
They were wild as they danced
around the lady in the trance

For the next dance of death.
as she was for the next sacrifice

2008-03-30T21:22:15Z

She said so still .Before i knew it my hair was on his pelt.The hooded one with the big teeth 'said your next as they threw me on the leafs.Next thing i seen hoping it was a dream ' was the man with the big horns on;as he was chanting you were never to be born.

2008-03-30T21:28:42Z

Sorry i forgot to say do you like it as this is a yahoo rule.

HaBrEe12008-03-31T07:15:11Z

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Excellent, to tell us how you are suffering the lonely nights in an amazing way.
Good Luck!!!

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Anonymous2016-04-04T03:18:09Z

These are some really good books that I've read and thoroughly enjoyed: -the Bartimaeus trilogy by Jonathan Stroud (SOOO HILARIOUS!!!)***** -the Artemis Fowl series by Eoin Coffer* -The Truth About Forever by Sarah Dessen(any book by her) -Hawksong(series) by Amelia At-water Rhodes -The Shannara series by Terry Brooks* -Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte -Watership Down by Richard Adams -Great Expectations by Charles Dickens* -Warrior Cats series by Erin Hunter -The Counte of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas* -The Princess Bride by William Goldman* *'s are the ones I really REALLY recommend for anyone to read!!! For you, I definately suggest The Princess Bride and then, possibly, The Counte of Monte Cristo

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Anonymous2008-03-30T21:33:07Z

Your final draft would be better written by steel pen or goose quill dipped in milk upon the best white bond. Then, once a
worthy reader fondles your work, let the heat of open flames flickering up under poem suddenly reveal secret lines. Find
rebirth like the Phoenix.

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Anonymous2008-03-30T23:11:11Z

Is it the shadows of your mind, or the deep desire of unprovided curiousity...is it the hollowed feelings left empty from past, dashed hopes, or imagination left over from some half discarded dream...is it the attempt to drive someone else's heart to places they dare not tread, or possibly to fullfil a necessary dread. A story, a poem, a page torn from a book of forbidden troubles...whatever the source, it matters not, for it is what you chose to endure.

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Cami lives2008-03-30T21:33:33Z

I really liked this and this may be the best ever.It is dark and i like how you put no one under 16 good shot..

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