My poem the darkest woods it is dark .Not for under 16?

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There i was in the dark 
                              howling woods sounds of laughter 
                                     filled the air.
                              
                           All i seen were shadows in shiny black 
                                   with blood and sulfur 
                               seeping from the sacks 

                    I thought i was dreaming with 
                           all the screaming 
                       from the coffins in the woods.

                          They were sing they were screaming 
                                    chants from long ago
                            They were wild as they danced 
                                     around the lady in the trance 
  
                                           For the next dance of death.
                                 as she was for the next sacrifice

HaBrEe1 · Accepted Answer

Excellent, to tell us how you are suffering the lonely nights in an amazing way.
Good Luck!!!

Anonymous · Answer

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Anonymous · Answer

Your final draft would be better written by steel pen or goose quill dipped in milk upon the best white bond.  Then, once a
worthy reader fondles your work, let the heat of open flames flickering up under poem suddenly reveal secret lines.  Find
rebirth like the Phoenix.

Anonymous · Answer

Is it the shadows of your mind, or the deep desire of unprovided curiousity...is it the hollowed feelings left empty from past, dashed hopes, or imagination left over from some half discarded dream...is it the attempt to drive someone else's heart to places they dare not tread, or possibly to fullfil a necessary dread.  A story, a poem, a page torn from a book of forbidden troubles...whatever the source, it matters not, for it is what you chose to endure.

prahlad d · Answer

Dear Sherry,Thought is good and u have maintained it but still flying with negative thinking,Pl.,change to positive.

Cami lives · Answer

I really liked this and this may be the best ever.It is dark and i like how you put no one under 16 good shot..

Anonymous · Answer

I loved your poem so much it was off the hook.your getting to be a great writer with time         .peace .friend.  Sharon

Anonymous · Answer

Very nice sherry ' you did a great job.lots of luck with life...Chris.

laney · Answer

very good, flowing and
scary. but the poem had
rhythm.
laney

See how they run · Answer

Yes, it's pretty dark.

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My poem the darkest woods it is dark .Not for under 16?

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