2 more to judge?

Here are two I wrote this morning over coffee. I dont have a lot of knowledge of poetry. I just write what I feel.

Someday
Someday you will know the truth about you
Someday you will know what you put me through
Someday maybe soon you will feint a swoon
Someday you will wail at the moon.

You Deserve each other
You are the moth flapping against his flame
He doesnt love you
You merely amuse him and worship his name
The ones who love you
You regard with the same
intolerant impatience until we are few
You believe your mind is oh so tame
You believe it feels innocent as dew
Everything you think is just more of the same
How can I know if its you that I knew?

Klondike Goldie2008-05-10T06:09:20Z

Favorite Answer

As I look at these lines and ponder an answer I think of Rudolph, comet and Prancer...I think these lines are alright, merry Christmas to all ...and to all a good night.

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