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2 more to judge?

Here are two I wrote this morning over coffee. I dont have a lot of knowledge of poetry. I just write what I feel.

Someday

Someday you will know the truth about you

Someday you will know what you put me through

Someday maybe soon you will feint a swoon

Someday you will wail at the moon.

You Deserve each other

You are the moth flapping against his flame

He doesnt love you

You merely amuse him and worship his name

The ones who love you

You regard with the same

intolerant impatience until we are few

You believe your mind is oh so tame

You believe it feels innocent as dew

Everything you think is just more of the same

How can I know if its you that I knew?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    As I look at these lines and ponder an answer I think of Rudolph, comet and Prancer...I think these lines are alright, merry Christmas to all ...and to all a good night.

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