Care to share in my solitude?



this day

in solitude
you come to me
tempest
your thoughts
lay to rest
on my fingertips
as your
wanton desire
manipulates
my mind
I lose myself
in a world
surreal
as eternity
passes
I sit muted
eyes glazed
in euphoric
silence


Temari

Semp-listic!2008-10-01T15:40:27Z

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I've never met anyone with as much command over words as you. You are a true master of the art of poetry.

vitraux2008-10-01T21:15:57Z

As always, your words mesmerize the wanting soul. I thank you for sharing your thoughts and emotions...be well.

Anonymous2008-10-01T22:50:20Z

Yes, you always deliver the mail. This is complete; good story, good form, good art.

King of Biscuits2008-10-02T17:34:32Z

Share in this air of peace
Shout for the silence awaits
Shiver in the world of me
Shhhh........this sound is mine

sher2008-10-01T23:49:09Z

This is perfect. Sometimes those are the best days.

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