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Temari
Lv 6
Temari asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Care to share in my solitude?

this day

in solitude

you come to me

tempest

your thoughts

lay to rest

on my fingertips

as your

wanton desire

manipulates

my mind

I lose myself

in a world

surreal

as eternity

passes

I sit muted

eyes glazed

in euphoric

silence

Temari

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  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    I've never met anyone with as much command over words as you. You are a true master of the art of poetry.

    Source(s): I bow to your astounding pen!
  • 1 decade ago

    As always, your words mesmerize the wanting soul. I thank you for sharing your thoughts and emotions...be well.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Yes, you always deliver the mail. This is complete; good story, good form, good art.

  • 1 decade ago

    Share in this air of peace

    Shout for the silence awaits

    Shiver in the world of me

    Shhhh........this sound is mine

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  • sher
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    This is perfect. Sometimes those are the best days.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i can see the look of desire in the burning fire

    i can see your face temari,

    the glow the charisma of ur eyes ,

    .it is these things which help ur emotion to surmise.

    HELLO CANADA''

  • 1 decade ago

    No -- too wanton.

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