Will you comment on this one?

Fairytale endings
Dissolve into
Broken promises
Scattered memories
Like shards of glass
Cutting into
My reality
My indigo dreams...

A blue stream
Of tears flow
From parched eyes
Down a face
Plagued
With forgiveness
Lips part
As if to speak
But words
Vanish
Into thin air...

Is this where the story ends?
Memories of once upon a time....

Temari

?2009-06-03T12:41:25Z

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in solitude......

......we see ourselves...

...clearer.......

Anonymous2009-06-03T16:20:45Z

The story does not end here...it is but a chapter in the eternal journey.
This is very lovely. I will continue to hold this poem in my consciousness for some time. It deserves thought and appreciation.

Just Be2009-06-03T11:29:32Z

Both beautiful & sad!
Blessings!