.......................................if i wrote a poem..................?

read this...tell me what you think...please don't spare my feelings, if you thought is sucked say so...

The View From On Top of My Desk Looks Pretty Bleak

Two
Apple-cores
were sitting on my desk
my midnight snack from last night, now shriveled and brown
and they said, I'd rather be dead than old and cold sitting here like this, useless
so i threw them away.

Some people said it was wrong so they made posters and yelled up at my window and they wrote a letter to the news.
and the news made a huge production of it all. Three rings, top hat, lions and tiger, the whole deal.
But everyone knows news people have no souls, so i didn't care.

Then the apple-cores
came back from beyond on a white cloud and asked what all the fuss was about, but nobody said a word.
Not a word.

?2009-07-27T19:03:54Z

Favorite Answer

I thought it was pretty interesting. I don't get the spacing though, why is it
Two
Apple-cores
were sitting on my desk.
instead of it all being on one line? and some lines are so long...

laura_bean082009-07-28T01:51:31Z

It was very creative, and I like the inner message in it. keep up the good work.