How do u like these poems that i wrote?

Ok, i have been writing a lot of poems recently, and i wanted an opinion on some of them:

Rich leaves fill the ground
Autumn tranquility stirs
Sunlight dreams again

Laughter fills the air
The earth is full and nurtured
Heat radiates joy.

so what do u think? yeah, these r haikus, sooooo....

Umesh Santoshi2011-04-24T10:04:06Z

Favorite Answer

dreams of nature

Cup2011-04-24T10:11:54Z

I like them. Rich words. Nice imagery.

?2011-04-24T10:11:21Z

Not bad and not so good. Revise it again.

Anonymous2011-04-24T09:44:02Z

....sooo no...